So I have decided that I don't really like the "Those Hazel Eyes" story. So it may have to be removed and changed. A lot. It's missing something.....
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I think the story does a weird switch in the middle. It becomes very detail oriented, explaining every particular. While the beginning is much more vague and general. Kinda choppy with some of the details and occurence of events...Botton line, Leave it. Science is 'perfect'. Art isn't.
1 comment:
I think the story does a weird switch in the middle. It becomes very detail oriented, explaining every particular. While the beginning is much more vague and general. Kinda choppy with some of the details and occurence of events...Botton line, Leave it. Science is 'perfect'. Art isn't.
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